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Old 05-28-2004
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Default **TO AN ABSENTEE FATHER**

I can see what you don't want
others to know. I can tell that
you cowardice is deep
as
drifted snow.
You're
low
and about to screech your train
Declare yourself insane
retract you statement
withdraw from the game. Feelin' lame,
limpin on that broken crutch that's
not ass sturdy as is once was
because it'z been used too much like a phone cord
after years of double-dutch?
Running out of places to haven in,shield you from the wind,
all four of which you created when you chose to
walk out that door
and leave me, at age four
to weather the world, whether it
hurled stones, burned, twirled........

....Right now, I'm lookin' at my niece,
sleeping, curled up under me.
Even though my foot's asleep
I don't wanna move
'CAUSE I'M NOT YOU.
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that one hit close to home. i was most definitely feelin it.
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Default Re: **TO AN ABSENTEE FATHER**

Quote:
Originally Posted by AfroPoeticSista
I can see what you don't want
others to know. I can tell that
you cowardice is deep
as
drifted snow.
You're
low
and about to screech your train
Declare yourself insane
retract you statement
withdraw from the game. Feelin' lame,
limpin on that broken crutch that's
not ass sturdy as is once was
because it'z been used too much like a phone cord
after years of double-dutch?
Running out of places to haven in,shield you from the wind,
all four of which you created when you chose to
walk out that door
and leave me, at age four
to weather the world, whether it
hurled stones, burned, twirled........

....Right now, I'm lookin' at my niece,
sleeping, curled up under me.
Even though my foot's asleep
I don't wanna move
'CAUSE I'M NOT YOU.
That was good. :cry:
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I'm really feeling you on this.
Keep ya head up ma.
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Tori Im really feelin that poem. I can relate too.
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Default Re: **TO AN ABSENTEE FATHER**

Quote:
Originally Posted by AfroPoeticSista
I can see what you don't want
others to know. I can tell that
you cowardice is deep
as
drifted snow.
You're
low
and about to screech your train
Declare yourself insane
retract you statement
withdraw from the game. Feelin' lame,
limpin on that broken crutch that's
not ass sturdy as is once was
because it'z been used too much like a phone cord
after years of double-dutch?
Running out of places to haven in,shield you from the wind,
all four of which you created when you chose to
walk out that door
and leave me, at age four
to weather the world, whether it
hurled stones, burned, twirled........

....Right now, I'm lookin' at my niece,
sleeping, curled up under me.
Even though my foot's asleep
I don't wanna move
'CAUSE I'M NOT YOU.
^^^That's my dogg, right there. Gurl u tha truth. You have a tru gift Tori. Do tha d a m n thang, gurl. PLATINUM CLUB BIOTCH!!!!!!!!!
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