If Time is Money, and Money is Time...

[Soundcheck 1898]

(incomplete... tell me what u think so far, its a spoken word joint so it might not flow right in ya head, so be creative)


If Time is Money
and money is Time
if i'm dead broke does it mean my time has run out.
I'm lacking in funds, forcing me to take the working mans route
because now my money's funny causin me to question
what life's REALLY about

You See...
I was once told that life is free
but the cost of living in my hood
causes me to disagree's
YOU SEE!!!....
or rather hear it everytime u turn on
u're radio and/or TV
while you get brainwashed to think that your purpose in life
is to live in luxury.....

"Money Power Respect
and eating right....
Money Power Respect
what u need in life......"
Will F! u ova...
if u don't get u're priorities right

They say money makes the world go round
Therefore, as the world turns
so must the wheels of economics
so IN turn
fiscal whips crack
to produce bruised and bloody silverbacks
I'm a slave to get paid
yet my time and funds still subtract
F! THAT!!!

From the moment we're born
the countdown begins to end
and right now i'm counting 9 to 5
paycheck pimpin to survive

I live to die...
Is this really what life's about
but how can this be if time supposedly is infinite
how can i possibly run out...

-FableOne aka MonkRenny

Thoughts? (it needs some work)

[LuvsAngel]

THATS WHATS UP
I'm feelin this

[Soundcheck 1898]

Preciate it... does it makes sense tho? Thats my main thing. Sometimes im' on some esoteric stuff and i don't realize it other people read it.

[LuvsAngel]

As long as it makes sense to u; you're doing good.
Trust that the right minds will get it.
I sure as hell understood what u were talking about

[Wisdom_Tree]

It shows the true essence of the universe and how everything is in bunches of simple relationships, making one complex ratio of 2:1 and 1:2. Nicely put.

[blaquezilla]

I liked it but she said it needs work, i agree, but i still liked it

[Soundcheck 1898]

Originally Posted by trent

I liked it but she said it needs work, i agree, but i still liked it

lol who's she? and what do you think it needs work on?