adDICKtion : an StLShawty original...

[I'm So St. Louis]

adDICKtion


Euphoric hang-glide
Soaring with multi-colored butterflies
Heart doing the Harlem shake
Eyes beckoning…
Asking: Can I touch you?

Though thinking: Can I f*ck you?

Fingertips tingle.
Electric charge.
Our chemistry collides.
Your energy becomes mine,
And we mesh.

Lips questioning: Can I kiss you?

Damn, king.

Can I

Kiss

You

In places that you deem ‘private’…?
Until your sensation
Is in tune with my vibration
And the combination
Of your skin plus my skin
Results in
Me won-der-in’
Just where tha hell do you begin
And
Where do I end?
See, if
What I'm experiencin'
Is considered a sin,
Hey, man
fukk it...
I'll just go to Hell then.

I wanna get lost in you
Like Alice in Wonderland.
Check you out - probing sacred lands
To discover just how deep
The rabbit hole goes.
With every movement, we compose
A harmoniously erotic opus.
Gyrate the lotus
To sounds of "Coitus...
N'dakeyuv Explosive".
Voo-doo daddy, working mad hocus pocus
With that whimsical, black magic wand.

Climactic grand finale.
Collectively numb.

Resting between ample honey pillows,
He whispers:

Can I keep you?

Damn, queen.

Can I

Keep

You?

My response?:

Can I believe you?
Please, make me believe you.

'Cause I
Fukkin' need you.

I'm sprung.

[a-lil-hektik]

Nice mami-
i guess aint nothin better than good d*ck

[Soundcheck 1898]

So when you gonna transfer to the AUC 8) . Nice stuff. Even tho its spoken word and I know everybody has a different flow i can get a good feel for your style in my head. I can tell you are serious about writing and put thought behind the stuff you put on paper. There are a lot of people out there perpetrating as poets. good stuff.

[I'm So St. Louis]

i really apprecate your insight. thanx alot. i do write as if i am speaking... like in all of my writing. i just really try to stay away from words that are over used, and i don't like for all my stuff to rhyme. when evry last word of every two lines sound the same.... its whack, n e one can rhyme two words together and call it a poem...... i try to go beyond that.

[The Big Girl Sweetz]

Amen sista!!

good write :wink:

[P o e t i q R e i g n]

Originally Posted by SoundCheck 1898

Nice stuff. Even tho its spoken word and I know everybody has a different flow i can get a good feel for your style in my head. I can tell you are serious about writing and put thought behind the stuff you put on paper. good stuff.

i agree with all of this...