Dat dude

[Just Me]

it dont rhyme but I was thinkin bout him so here it go....

I wish I could get back all the time I've given
all the feelings I caught
sometimes wish you'd give me back my heart
remember how late it was, and me and you'd still talk
youd call me real late and ask me to come over
we'd lay up and talk till you fell asleep
Id sit there and watch u, hopin u was dreamin bout me
all them words you said tho, they aint mean nothin
when you said that u cared, I was your beauty, your queen
so I gave you my heart piece by piece
and when you had it you kept it and went away fom me
Now I cant stop thinkin bout the words you said
the times we shared
the lil things I thought was special wint meant nothin to you
them kisses and the heat, you aint feel it too
if you felt what I felt u woulda never left me
I realized though that you are what you are
you made me love you and I dont wanna stop
and since you the one that got it, i want you to always have my heart

[The Big Girl Sweetz]

good write Bree...we have have Dat Dude in our lives ::sigh::

sidenote: there's no rule that states that a poem must ryhme...so speak on sista...speak on... :wink:

[Slim GoodyN757]

I believe every female can relate to this poem because we all have came across Trifling Men. But its ok it only makes you stronger Keep ya head up and let that man go

[blaquezilla]

that was tight to def and it did rhyme. just gotta be open minded when you read it. yeah I remember dat dame.

yo dat dame was sweet, so simple and unique,
never loved like this, but now i can reminisce,
days chillin with my boo, someone i'll always miss,
the way she used to kiss, had a ***** in bliss,
cause dat dame, went away, and I aint been the same,
wish i could see her again, just wanna hold her hand,
**** that talk about us chillin sayin we can only be friends,
she knew from the get go, her plans from the door,
some other dude stole her heart, so she thought real hard,
and made a plan to tear the next guys sole apart,
wish my eyes could see, and my lungs could breathe,
but i still got her scent lurkin inside of me,
so now love watches my back, and watch out for love,
cause if dat dame do it again then im gonna be messed up,
so i dont lust for dames, hope they dont lust for me,
cause loves a blessing and I wish she'd give it back it to me.

one

[Slim GoodyN757]

Originally Posted by blaquezilla

that was tight to def and it did rhyme. just gotta be open minded when you read it. yeah I remember dat dame.

yo dat dame was sweet, so simple and unique,
never loved like this, but now i can reminisce,
days chillin with my boo, someone i'll always miss,
the way she used to kiss, had a N*gga in bliss,
cause dat dame, went away, and I aint been the same,
wish i could see her again, just wanna hold her hand,
f**k that talk about us chillin sayin we can only be friends,
she knew from the get go, her plans from the door,
some other dude stole her heart, so she thought real hard,
and made a plan to tear the next guys sole apart,
wish my eyes could see, and my lungs could breathe,
but i still got her scent lurkin inside of me,
so now love watches my back, and watch out for love,
cause if dat dame do it again then im gonna be messed up,
so i dont lust for dames, hope they dont lust for me,
cause loves a blessing and I wish she'd give it back it to me.

one

Awww

[blaquezilla]

:cry: *wipes eyes*
dont worry i'll be aight. :lol:
nice job bree, did i say that already, no i dont think so. and if i did then damnit im saying it again. not just cause we cool but cuz i liked it. :wink:
one

[Just Me]

Originally Posted by blaquezilla

that was tight to def and it did rhyme. just gotta be open minded when you read it. yeah I remember dat dame.

yo dat dame was sweet, so simple and unique,
never loved like this, but now i can reminisce,
days chillin with my boo, someone i'll always miss,
the way she used to kiss, had a N*gga in bliss,
cause dat dame, went away, and I aint been the same,
wish i could see her again, just wanna hold her hand,
f**k that talk about us chillin sayin we can only be friends,
she knew from the get go, her plans from the door,
some other dude stole her heart, so she thought real hard,
and made a plan to tear the next guys sole apart,
wish my eyes could see, and my lungs could breathe,
but i still got her scent lurkin inside of me,
so now love watches my back, and watch out for love,
cause if dat dame do it again then im gonna be messed up,
so i dont lust for dames, hope they dont lust for me,
cause loves a blessing and I wish she'd give it back it to me.

one

:wink: awww shyt, dis nickuh done jacked and pimped my post.....Im feelin it tho...and thanks all yawl...