"Proclamation" and "I Promise" (2nd one

[Wisdom_Tree]

Proclamation

For a future uncertain, and a love so majestic

Passion, fall like curtains; leave doubt and forget it

And for the life I had before you

I am not him; forgive. I implore you

You know my eyes, that I adore you

So awesome and clear with no more hue

Promise me please youll be at my least

To remind my purpose and put me at ease

Deny me my wants and feed me my needs

I'll be finding peace once I'm on my knees

Passion, fall like curtains, leave doubt and forget it

For a future uncertain, and a love so majestic. - Fin
_________

I Promise

To judge you not of your past

When cold, my warm love i down cast

Blanket over you in all honesty

To provide for your needs, fullfill every fantasy

I see clearly the love before me,

In all honesty i place my heart before thee,

To see how you've cured it of all pain,

Of all cuts, of all bruises, you've stopped the rain,

Never to judge you but for whom you are at heart,

I know in the past...love's hurt us both, but in all purity,

And honesty,

in Love is how our True love will start. - Fin

[Miss. Soulful]

beautiful, you have a wonderful way with words

[Wisdom_Tree]

Originally Posted by Miss. Soulful

beautiful, you have a wonderful way with words

Thanks a bunch *big hugs*

[theatira]

great :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: use of words

[Wisdom_Tree]

For future notice, the first poem is mine, and the second was written by a female poet who Read mine.