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Old 07-11-2005
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Default An attempt to explain

I can't find the words to express
wat I really felt that day.
Nor can my rhymes address
everything I need to say....
Maybe,
It was meant to be,
someting else to allow me to learn,
I don't really undestand, i can't see,
I'm still waiting for my turn.
I'll just,
Try to undrstand why you left,
you left and where my heart should be is this hole
I'm under all this damn stress
Yet i still endure it all, it's taking it's toll
We should,
Talk about why your soul is connected to mine
why my head is for the first time siding with my heart.
My mind never wanted us to part.
And now,
All the pages in the world won't explain
why my soul is a black spirit why it's dead
I still, I still.... damn I feel the same
the way i did when we first met, memeories swarm my head
and still
i'm waiting
I'm waiting
still for..
the words,
to...
explain
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Old 07-18-2005
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yeah, i liked that alot.I can relate to that.
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Old 07-21-2005
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really nice...i like it...i can feel you on this one....i know exactly how you are feelin...
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