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Old 05-15-2004
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This is my Poem:


I have a lot to say, my last request
My heart hurts so I need to get this **** off my chest
I be trying to do you right but like Rocafella I had to go West
So all I got left is pride and myself
Because quite honestly I don't want to be with anyone else
What do I need? What I need girlfriend for?
To stick up for her when *****s call her a whore
I put my feelings aside, I try to ignore
As time went on it start to get to me more
Then the day came when I had to leave
Saw my relationship on the window of the car
Wiped my tears on my sleave
My pain was so bad it was hard to breath
I put my hard act on for u but I was torn apart underneath
"You can't be trusted", oh man that's ****ed up
I told you I was wrong, I admitted I ****ed up

I have a lot to say, my last request
My heart hurts so I need to get this **** off my chest
I remember sometime I couldn't take your ****
Looking at myself "Why do I take this ****?"
There are somethings about you I truly miss
Like when my body would be in awe because of your kiss
I remember the day you said you were mine
The thought making love you sent chills up my spine
I remember being lonely on ya work days when u work 5 to 9
I remember how I used to blush when u said I was fine
Now I feel like **** because you feel like I'm lying
Our love grew so strong now it's sad to see her dying
I'm going to be okay, because I feel you have it your way
No more kisses, no more worrying about 5 to 9 during the day
You said that I wanted it to end, but how is that
When I was the one that wanted it to be begin
I must be dreaming because this ain't real
No longer in a relationship, naw this ain't real
Me without you no that's no deal
But it's obvious that you don't give a **** how I feel
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Old 05-17-2004
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yeah yeah encore...clap clap clap.......whistle....that's my ***** right there.
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Thats whats up. I really like this one. I feel your pain.
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Originally Posted by P o e t i q R e i g n
sincerely straight from the heart...always the best kind of poetry...
cosigns...i like it
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