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Are You - Metered Poem (6-Syllable) Are You - Metered Poem (6-Syllable)

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Old 05-17-2004
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Default Are You - Metered Poem (6-Syllable)
But when the black stars pierce
And as the days grows so near
All while I dream and fear
Why wont you dissappear

The greatest loss and love
For what it costs, it sucks
Now, more than often, Us
Seems like it always was

Are you thinking about (me) Cuz' Im thinking about (you)
"How you can't live without (me)" Cuz I cant live without (you)
If you want me you got (me) And there's nothing to stop (me)
You know I'm ready for (you) This love is ready for (two)

Of all the things conversed
We played the part, rehearsed
How it would be, if first
We met without this curse

I get so very weak
This man who should not weep
Knowing that when you sleep
Its with your man, not me

Are you thinking about (me) Cuz' Im thinking about (you)
"How you can't live without (me)" Cuz I cant live without (you)
If you want me you got (me) And there's nothing to stop (me)
You know I'm ready for (you) This love is ready for (two)
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*applauds* I really like this. I would tell you how talented you are but you already know that. I think I may just print it out and later on in life this may be worth millions *giggles*
Keep on writing. Cause I'm definetly reading.
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this says exactly what you meant to say
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hold it down for the House man... alot of talented poets come out of there (e.g. Saul Williams). I've been trying to get out and recited stuff live but obvious reason this past semester I couldn't. I haven't really looked at this forum but i can tell i'll be spending a lot of time in here lol.


You chill with any Illyterati over there?
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hold it down for the House man... alot of talented poets come out of there (e.g. Saul Williams). I've been trying to get out and recited stuff live but obvious reason this past semester I couldn't. I haven't really looked at this forum but i can tell i'll be spending a lot of time in here lol.


You chill with any Illyterati over there?
Only by way of my brother Marcus - hes the one that gets me out and makes sure that I actually go to the social functions.
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